How Would You Start This Story?

I think you should have her driving in a car or being driven (whichever) and she's just going over the moment in her head. Maybe the moment she first found out she was going like when the judge sentenced her to go to Camp Woodworth or whenever she found out. Or you could have it start out with her packing for Camp and remembering. Either way I think you should have it somewhere before she actually gets to the camp.